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Ending a Novel

This entry is part [part not set] of 73 in the series The Writing Life Blog

I finished up chapter 20 today, which wrapped up the climax shown in the prologue. That meant it was time for a big decision: do I end the book here? My first inclination was that yes, I should end it here. After all, the climax itself was resolved in a very thorough manner. It would be a bit of a cliffhanger, though that’s not necessarily a bad thing. I am certainly eager to be done with this story as well. Impatient really as I can’t wait to get to the whole editing and publishing part. So when I finished chapter 20, I was ready to throw in the towel. Write a little epilogue so I didn’t leave readers hanging completely and call it done. It was the reaction from my girlfriend, who has been reading this story as I wrote it chapter by chapter, that changed my mind and got me to thinking. I was super excited to be done. She was very much not excited. I’ve asked her not to give me any feedback until I do my first edit since I have a list of things I’m going to add/change anyway. She’s done a great job sticking to my request too. It was her tone that gave it away though. She was very disappointed.

So I’ve been thinking about it all day now and even tried to put myself in the readers’ shoes. The story is really for them after all. Then I realized ending the story right here might just piss people off. I spent a lot of time and effort tiptoeing around a lot of secrets and subtext because my main character is completely in the dark about all of this and all of the others are actively keeping things that way. The climax is the breaking point, not just of the action, but of the information. I realized that if I didn’t keep going, I wasn’t going to give the readers the payoff they deserve for being in the dark along with the main character. This is why I’m two pages into chapter 21 and actually pretty glad I’m still going. I still plan to finish the book this weekend, it just means I’ll be doing more writing than I thought.

All of the writers that I’ve researched have said pretty much the same thing about writing a novel, or anything really: make it as long as it needs to be and no more. I have been keeping a close watch on my page and word counts because it gives me a feeling of accomplishment to look back every week or two and see just how far I’ve come. This being my first novel, the process has felt pretty long and drawn out. This has been discouraging at times so I always write down my page and word total when I finish a chapter. In the beginning, I was also worried that this story would be far too short. I grew up reader authors like Robert Jordan, J.R.R. Tolkien, and others. When I was that age I also thought that writing stories that long was what it took to be an author. Thankfully I am content these days to compare myself only to myself. For the most part. I’m doing this for me, because it’s fun and it’s something I’ve always wanted to do. So I am happy with how long my book has turned out to be, and amused that I was worried it would be too short. Character development takes awhile after all, or at least it does for me. Either way, I’m still crazy excited to be almost done!

One Week Down!

This entry is part [part not set] of 73 in the series The Writing Life Blog

My first week of writing is done and chapter 4 is coming along nicely. It’s been an interesting experience so far. Every night I’ve had serious doubts that I can keep writing as I have. Even my 1,000 word requirement seems intimidating before I sit down to actually do it. When I do sit down to write, it probably takes me a good 10 to 15 minutes before I’m really getting in to the flow of the story. Once I am though, I’m always surprised to suddenly realize that I’ve hit my goal already. I really hope I can keep this going.

On Writing

This entry is part [part not set] of 73 in the series The Writing Life Blog

As part of my more serious effort to really get in to writing, I ended up buying Stephen King’s book On Writing – A Memoir of the Craft. I have to say it was an inspiring read. The first half is devoted to Stephen King’s life in an effort to explain how he came to be a writer. I was pretty surprised to find out about his various addictions and battles with such. I’ve never been a big reader of horror novels and so far I’ve only read one (now two) of Mr. King’s books. Still, that first half was a page turner. The second half was where he really got down to his thoughts on the process of writing. He pointed out that many people who try to break in to the industry look for some trick or “magic bullet”. He quickly debunked the idea though. Funny enough, this actually made me realize that part of me had believed, or at least hoped, that such a trick did exist. After all, how much easier would it be if someone could serve up the Secret to Writing Success on a silver platter? I don’t know why any part of me still believed something so silly, but “hearing” the truth from Mr. King was actually pretty liberating. His tips on writing are very common sense, and one in particular I remind myself of every day: in order to get good at writing one must read and write constantly. There is no magic bullet to suddenly grant a prospective writer unending glorious inspiration. It takes daily perseverance to bring out our inner creativity. I found this gem of insight to be particularly inspiring. This, coupled with his advice to ignore our inner critic as best we can, has actually helped me tremendously.

Previously, my attempts at writing always started out high on expectations and grand ideas. A few times I even managed to get some serious amounts of words written in single sessions. The problem was always the next day. Inevitably, the mood of inspiration I had felt the day before was squashed by the various daily demands on my time: sleep, work, food, people, and my own entertaining distractions. It was just so much easier to come home after a long day, play some video games, eat dinner, and maybe watch a movie or read a book. Much easier than sitting down at my computer and ignoring my enormous Steam game library. Mr. King pointed out that it is only with daily writing that we can train our brains, including that stubborn creative muse, to become accustomed to the whole process. Really, it’s not rocket science and is incredibly obvious once it is pointed out. It makes me wonder why writers tend to seem mysterious and inscrutable to those of us who simply enjoy the fruits of their secretive labor. Back to the point though. He recommended that new writers start out writing 2,000 words a day. He noted that his personal minimum is 4,000 (!), a rather intimidating sum. For myself, I’ve decided on a starting daily requirement of just 1,000 words a day on my current project, not including any other sources of writing.  I have found this to be a very reasonable number to start with. This is only my first week trying, but I’ve already made more progress on my story in less than a week than I have in the past 10 years. So cheers and a huge thank you to Stephen King for deciding to write and then finish his memoir in spite of his brush with death and his painful recovery. This hopeful writer greatly appreciates your help.